• Zachariah@lemmy.world
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    10 days ago

    I’m a dumbass. I didn’t realize it was your writing. I would have given a more considerate critique. Interesting to see what you were intending. I put it behind a spoiler tag in case anyone wants the full effect.

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      10 days ago

      I was trying to make a filler that is somewhat related to the story at hand and that points the reader at a direction of some kind of philosophical discussion here. Like I was comparing my work to the situation in Georgia. And my personal experience to that situation. As to show how insane the whole thing really is. Maybe I over-indulged myself with the filler. Now I look at it and it is kind of funny to me that I wrote so much of it.

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        10 days ago

        Hey, OC is hard. You’re doing better than me. I don’t post anything at all. Way easier to react to others’ work.

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          10 days ago

          IDK sometime it feels not enough to just share a link to a story. It feels like I need to make sure people know exactly how I personally see the issue at hand. Hell I made 2 projects each of which took me more than 3 years. So it is 6 years only for 2 projects. Maybe I’m just exceptionally megalomanian…